Dava Sobel‘s The Glass Universe continues to inspire me. Although I couldn’t find any direct relationship between stellar spectra and the Fibonacci sequence, a mathematical form seemed appropriate for this topic.
Stars
hide
secrets
in white light.
Spectral lines reveal
elemental composition
and temperature to sleuths who probe their mystery.
© Catherine Flynn, 2017
Writing poems in a specific form can be a fun yet challenging way to summarize learning in any subject area. The concision of poetry forces kids to hone in on the essential aspects of a topic, book or article. It also provides an authentic purpose for using subject-specific vocabulary. As I wrote this poem, I found my biggest challenge wasn’t the basic science behind the stellar spectra, but getting the right words to match the syllable count of a Fibonacci poem.
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Thank you for so much in this post, especially your poem and the introduction to Fibonacci poems. I’m looking forward to giving them a try! Fitting a content-specific topic into a form looks like a real challenge.
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Thank you for inspiring me to try this format!
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Thanks for reminding me of this form. Last week we got to the letter E for Ekphrastic, so when we return we will be on F. Fib poems, of course. This science is fascinating but way above my head. Thanks for the inspiration.
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Thank you for the inspiration of a Fibonacci poem.
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You are the second Fibonacci poem writer I’ve read today. So excited to learn about a new form. Love that “Glass Universe” continues to inspire you. Can’t wait to dive in this weekend!
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I am right there with Margaret – I am not a science teacher for a reason! I wish more of our content areas would use writing poetry as a way to show mastery of concepts. Maybe I should them this! 🙂
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Although challenging, don’t you love it when the syllables fit, like “elemental composition”? Wonderful!
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Great poem and great point on creating subject-specific poetry. I loved the line, “…to sleuths who probe their mystery.” Creative and thoughtful post, as always!
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Love this! You are mastering the craft of writing. Need to check out “The Glass Universe”.
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Your poem and description of poetry’s power cuts to an important point about how to purposefully integrate learning and writing. Brilliant thinking.
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Great sounds in “spectral lines” and “sleuths,” Catherine. The 3rd graders I visit sometimes write Fibs with their science unit on Light. They would love this poem!
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