The first Friday of the month means it’s time for another Inkling challenge. It was my turn to pose this month’s prompt, and I chose this “Invitation for Writing and Reflection” from How to Love the World: Poems of Gratitude and Hope, edited by James Crews. Inspired by Sally Bliumis-Dunn‘s poem, “Work,” Crews asks readers to consider
…a time when you felt so consumed with the act of making something that you lost all sense of time, and your mind seemed to clear? What allowed you to enter this mindful creative space?
As you may know, I have been knitting for many years, but the arrival of grandchildren has kicked my obsession into high gear. While I am knitting, I often run my hand across the fabric that is literally being created in my hands and marvel at how such a transformation is possible. Of course my poem had to be about knitting.
I also happen to love space and astronomy and am intrigued by physic topics I never felt smart enough to study in college. Thanks to Brian Greene and Lisa Randall, I was able to weave together my curiosity about the universe and my passion for knitting to create this poem:
String Theory
Careworn fingers,
calloused and crooked,
ply needles that vibrate
with quicksilver energy –
slide – wrap – glide –
intertwined geometry.
Gradually, a dancing filament
of yarn is transformed,
a new dimension created,
bound with invisible strands
of love and warmth,
connecting hearts.
Draft, © Catherine Flynn, 2023
Please be sure to visit my fellow Inklings to read their responses to this challenge, the head on over to Laura Shovan’s blog for the Poetry Friday Roundup
Heidi Mordhorst @ My Juicy Little Universe
Linda Mitchell @ A Word Edgewise
Margaret Simon @ Reflections on the Teche
Mary Lee Hahn @ A(nother) Year of Reading
Molly Hogan @ Nix the Comfort Zone
Reading to the Core 
Love those “invisible strands/ of love and warmth”. Poetry is such a delight.
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Nicely said. If I had time, I’d get out my needles and make something for my just one year old grandson.
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I love this poem and how the knitting binds you to loving your grandchildren…that recent photo of H on instag. is like looking at a mini-YOU! I hope she also learns the intertwined geometry of family in the ways you have. What a lucky kid to have you as a Grandma.
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Oh my goodness, I love how you have braided these passions together, Catherine! Intertwined geometry indeed…I heard or read somewhere this week how instead of worrying about what to wear or what someone said (or didn’t), Einstein used his brain to imagine the universe. He imagined his theories first, THEN found the math to prove them. Your poem reminds me of that. xo
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On second reading, I find that the word “gradually” may be among the most important in the poem. Big Bang notwithstanding, it is gradually that our intertwined geometry is created. Beautiful!
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I, too, love that you’ve made this wonderful connection. One of my creative granddaughters knits, among so many other creativity. I will share that you wrote “invisible strands /of love and warmth,”, Catherine. And, I gave Crews book to several people for Christmas, a gem to have, to re-visit. Thanks!
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“so many other kinds of creativity! Yikes
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Cool connections, Catherine! I especially like “dancing filament”
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Your poem has evoked memories of my mother knitting various garments across my childhood, Catherine. Like you, she regularly stroked the knitted fabric as it emerged from the jousting of the knitting needles. As you write in your poem it was with ‘quicksilver energy’ that I observed my machine like motions. Thank you for your poem and the reminder of my past.
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Oh, I love this–poetry and knitting together! I’m better at poetry than at knitting, though I love both. Thank you for this quicksilver beauty!
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Such a great weaving of knitting and physics! Love the invisible strands of love and warmth… When I make up a bed in our Tahoe home for the next visitor, I run my hands over the sheets, the blankets, the comforter, and think of those who just left, and those who will arrive – with similar strokes of love and warmth.
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I just love this poem and the powerful layers of meaning you’ve evoked with such perfect word choice and repeated sounds. Gorgeous!!
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A beautiful poem, Catherine. I love the rhythm you created and the various beautiful phrases, especially “quicksilver energy,” “intertwined geometry,” love and warmth.” Thank you.
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Masterfully woven! Well done. 🙂
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The way you made this poem about so much more than knitting…definitely a mentor text for me!
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I love how you added spacing in the middle and that “intertwined geometry”, my favorite line, has its own space.
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String theory! Intertwined geometry is such a lovely way to refer to knitting – and it truly IS geometry, a magic that I can’t reproduce well on paper, but the “slide-wrap-glide” is a potent, portable mathematical magic. Lovely.
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I’m with you, Catherine. Knitting is fascinating. How we take ONE STRING and make socks, sweaters, baby blankets! I read that knitted objects are sometimes used to teach Physics majors about complex forms.
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