When her children were small,
evenings were busy and full.
Dinner on the table before exhaustion set in.
Baths and stories,
boys in their blanket sleepers,
clean and snuggly,
clamoring for stories and lullabies.
Years went by.
Swim meets and soccer practice,
boy scouts and music lessons.
Dinner later and later.
Rushing seemed their only speed.
Then one of those boys left for college.
Fewer games to cheer at,
mountains of laundry eroded to foothills.
Soon enough, both boys were gone.
Now she is greeted
by a fluffy orange cat,
purring and happy to see her.
The house is quite.
Nowhere to rush to.
the silence of her empty house
made her feel
But most of the time,
she welcomes the peace at day’s end.
In the kitchen, no longer rushed,
she finds pleasure chopping onions,
keeping time with the dripping rain.
© Catherine Flynn, 2015
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5 thoughts on “Slice of Life: Day’s End”
I loved this…and am totally worried about the same occurring in my house soon. Thank you for expressing your transition so well.
Love your poem and the passage of time so skillfully crafted. I also loved the final image of keeping time with the rain. Thank you!
I enjoyed this beautiful reflection on the passage of time. Our first will be headed off to college next year. I am so happy for him and all that he has ahead. I do dread the hole he will leave behind but thinking about less laundry and running around gives me some comfort.
Very nice memories captured, and good ones happening now too. Love the mountains to foothills-fun image!
I can really relate to this one! But wait until you retire and realllly have time to yourself! You’re gonna love it!