This month’s Ditty Challenge made me smile. Jesse Anna Bornemann challenged readers of Michelle Heidenrich Barnes‘s lovely blog to
“Write a poem inspired by song lyrics…Pick a Beatles song (or, if you’re not a Beatles fan, a song by your favorite band), write down as many words from the song as you can, then compose a poem that uses at least three words from your list. Don’t tell us the song that inspired your poem—see if we can guess!”
I am a huge Beatles fan, so lyrics started flowing through my mind immediately. So many tunes were tumbling around in my head, I quickly realized it would be really hard to pick a song! Another challenge that was soon apparent is that many Beatles songs are long on repetition, meaning that word choice could be limited. Then, one afternoon in the grocery store, a Beatles song began. Bingo! This was the song to use.
Repetition isn’t a technique I use often enough, so I took my inspiration a step further and used a repeating line throughout this draft.
“Our Yard”
Our yard is teeming with life.
Each evening, deer wander through,
Happy to forage on grass
And golden apples that have fallen,
A ring of sweets under the tree.
Our yard is teeming with life.
Each evening, a band of crickets
And other insects
Sing their summer song.
Each evening, a hawk
perches high in the pine tree,
waiting to spot a mouse
Running home to his burrow.
Our yard is teeming with life.
Catherine Flynn, Draft © 2019
I count eight words from the song I chose. Can you guess what it is?
The hawk on the lookout for supper.An update: The Beatles song that inspired this poem is Ob-La-Di Ob-La-Da. The words from the song are: band, life, ring, sing, home, yard, happy, and golden. Thank you to Jesse and Michelle for this fun challenge!
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